Friday, December 18, 2009

Poemic Haiku?

This is perhaps a little too literal in working the hybridization of poetry and comics.   Still, I had this idea and wanted to see what it looked like.  And then I thought I would share it.  I'm wondering if I've crossed some definitional line here from a poemic to an illustrated poem.  Anyway, I offer this here as a work (or really, concept) in progress and welcome whatever comments or meditations on poemics it provokes.


  1. yes! this is so good!

    I guess the illustrated poem changes into a poemic when the illustration changes the message :)

  2. A very good, original piece! I should read/see all segments at once. Is dot a borderline case of strip? Certainly.